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Model and mua: Natalie Lucas

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Image size
457x686px 295.98 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
Shutter Speed
1/125 second
Aperture
F/16.0
Focal Length
25 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Aug 29, 2009, 8:54:06 AM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

a short critique (and when I finished my original typing of this it was only 80 words out of 100 so I had to add this; but I think my critique is fair and reasoned regardless of the word count... what do you think?)--

Cons: the line between the background and the floor is really distracting and the fact that the subject/model is dead center is kinda boring.

Pros: Model has a great pose; Wonderful contrast between the neutral grey and the vibrant red of the coat. Great exposure.

Suggestions: Even if you like this composition (centered), perhaps you can "spice" it up by experimenting with changing the direction of the light-source, or perhaps the angle of the shot.

Synopsis: Nice!